TailorTF
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« on: November 26, 2009, 04:05:04 PM » |
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Hello,I am new here,but I got a little idea.I got some sprites and made a little sprite comic about Spelunky.Opinions and comments appreciated. 
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« Last Edit: November 26, 2009, 04:41:04 PM by TailorTF »
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beatthelastboss
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« Reply #1 on: November 26, 2009, 06:20:23 PM » |
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marsgreekgod
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« Reply #2 on: November 26, 2009, 06:58:47 PM » |
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nice idea. but you makeing to many chars to start, and it's too zoomed in. and the recolors are bad. do you want better recolors?
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TailorTF
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« Reply #3 on: November 27, 2009, 03:39:58 AM » |
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Part 2 I tried to do some custom heads and did a completely different size. Can't quite stop recoloring stuff. 
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eguee
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« Reply #4 on: November 27, 2009, 03:42:08 AM » |
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....? What?
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ipwnu1337
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« Reply #5 on: November 27, 2009, 09:42:39 AM » |
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I am confused.
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beatthelastboss
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« Reply #6 on: November 27, 2009, 09:46:50 AM » |
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I am confused.
Ditto...  ... *Steps on ditto* "EWW!!! ITS ALL OVER MY SHOES!!!"
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marsgreekgod
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« Reply #7 on: November 27, 2009, 12:48:58 PM » |
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lame 7 out 100.
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Ninja_Zane
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« Reply #8 on: November 27, 2009, 01:00:29 PM » |
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¿§†ƒÜ¿ I don't get it.
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marsgreekgod
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« Reply #9 on: November 27, 2009, 01:44:47 PM » |
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I can't even tell where the panels end...
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Kegluneq
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« Reply #10 on: November 27, 2009, 10:16:03 PM » |
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Yea, no offense but... That wasn't that great. And very confusing.
I think you're trying too hard. Most good sprite comics, or just about any comic for that matter, come from a rather simple idea.
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A wild SHINY MOSSY appeared!
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pmprog
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« Reply #11 on: November 30, 2009, 12:00:45 PM » |
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I've got a great idea for a little one, will do it when I get home :-)
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marsgreekgod
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« Reply #12 on: November 30, 2009, 12:08:33 PM » |
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make sure we can tell the panels apart. and you say who people are, and what they are doing. and you don't recolor badly.
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pmprog
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« Reply #13 on: November 30, 2009, 01:10:42 PM » |
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 Would love to hear feedback Edit:  Oh the cliched scenario 
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ipwnu1337
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« Reply #14 on: November 30, 2009, 04:32:30 PM » |
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The situation in the second panel is very easy to overcome. Jump on to the mummies' heads and jump off to victory.
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