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« on: August 17, 2010, 11:47:55 AM » |
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Spelunkying: A Guide! This is a comic based around the journal of a spelunker who, unsurprisingly, ventures into the cave we are all to familiar with. If you like this comic, please comment on it. Ask me questions, I'll be happy to answer. #1 - The Cover#2 - First Page#3 - It makes no sense.#4 - What the hell why do these things bleed so much.
Revised version of #4
Revised version (Again) of #4
#5: Snakes, Giant Spiders, Snakes.#6! Conspicuous invincibility of items?Comments and criticism are appreciated, acknowledged, and encouraged. I'm really just testing out a drawing pad I got a little while ago. |
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Yknuleps II
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« Reply #1 on: August 17, 2010, 12:04:43 PM » |
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looks promising... and those drawing pads are awesome  |
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Don't read this again.
No, seriously, stop reading it now.
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ipwnu1337
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« Reply #2 on: August 17, 2010, 12:05:43 PM » |
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I just fixed the second page, photobucket did something stupid and left something uploaded when I was going to remove it.
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marsgreekgod
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The will of the Galaxy.
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« Reply #3 on: August 17, 2010, 12:16:42 PM » |
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I really like this. I give this an 8.75 out of 9.70
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Show your power, Gun Del Hell! Show them their fate! Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes! Here we go! Let's go, go, go, go, Django! Light and Dark! It comes down to this! Be afraid, Sun!
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« Reply #4 on: August 17, 2010, 12:25:05 PM » |
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Ten brownie points to anyone who can find out 1 (out of 2) book references in this comic. That and I'll stick you somewhere in the comic for one page.
(Note that these references are very, very vague.)
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marsgreekgod
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« Reply #5 on: August 17, 2010, 05:05:05 PM » |
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yay! new post!
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Show your power, Gun Del Hell! Show them their fate! Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes! Here we go! Let's go, go, go, go, Django! Light and Dark! It comes down to this! Be afraid, Sun!
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ipwnu1337
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« Reply #6 on: August 17, 2010, 05:07:02 PM » |
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Comic #3 is out!I'm really just going to complaining about things that don't make sense in spelunky.
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marsgreekgod
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« Reply #7 on: August 17, 2010, 05:08:39 PM » |
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Isn't that the whole point?
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Show your power, Gun Del Hell! Show them their fate! Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes! Here we go! Let's go, go, go, go, Django! Light and Dark! It comes down to this! Be afraid, Sun!
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ipwnu1337
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« Reply #8 on: August 17, 2010, 05:08:54 PM » |
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Of course! What else could I write about?
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« Reply #9 on: August 18, 2010, 09:59:03 AM » |
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Many, many things.
Still, I like the way the lines look like sketches, gives it a loose, organic feeling when on the brown paper backdrop. I think it's unnecessary and distracting to have the frayed edges, especially when not all the sides have it.
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« Reply #10 on: August 18, 2010, 10:08:14 AM » |
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I rather like the frayed edges. Considering it's from Spelunker's old personal log, it gives it that rustic feel. And of course not ALL the edges would be frayed; they're from different parts of the book.
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« Reply #11 on: August 18, 2010, 10:39:39 AM » |
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Very nice! Albeit, your using a stickman.. it still looks okay.  |
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ipwnu1337
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« Reply #12 on: August 18, 2010, 04:36:49 PM » |
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#4 - What the hell why do these things bleed so much.It's out! I found some great brushsets for bloodsplatters and fingerprints. If it's too difficult to read tell me, and I'll post one without all the blood. So yeah, it's never made sense why snakes, spiders, and purple(!) bats bleed tennis ball-sized droplets of blood.
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